Giver
The green plucked pumpkin
steams in my pot
not for the cobbler but for the
cobblestones
painted with rust and toiled
doilies.
I’ve seen the apple-skin-
steams in my pot
not for the cobbler but for the
cobblestones
painted with rust and toiled
doilies.
I’ve seen the apple-skin-
thin widow
lay her wishing head upon
washed rags and
washed rags and
fossilled leaves
with fresh blessings
for her losses—
the etchings in her sandalled cheek
where cobblers and merchants tread
with heavy steps
unknowingly tapping stones
into old world
works of art
where cobblers and merchants tread
with heavy steps
unknowingly tapping stones
into old world
works of art
fringed with prairie grass.
J.lynn Sheridan poems and writes in the Chain O’Lakes area of northern Illinois where she lives with her scruffy construction-guy husband and children, but she’d rather live in an old hardware store for the aroma and ambiance. Her poems can most recently be found in Beyond the Dark Room (an international poetry anthology), a Poetic Bloomings’ anthology , MouseTail Press and her blog, https://writingonthesun.wordpress.com and @J.lynnSheridan.
Nice... I especially like the first stanza and how it sounds read aloud.
ReplyDeleteGreat images . . . "lay her wishing head upon washed rags and fossilled leaves"! Fabulous, way to go!
ReplyDeletegreat imagery. easy to picture the the widow!
ReplyDeleteThe images, internal rhyme, overall sound and flow of this piece are all just fantastic, Janice.
ReplyDeletewell done Janice ... a great write ... this just sings, and the pictures you paint are alive "the etchings in her sandalled cheek" caught me in particular ...
ReplyDeleteNice one. My favorite:
ReplyDelete"unknowingly tapping stones
into old world
works of art"
Beautiful imagery.
Vividly wonderful. I like the surprise element in not for the cobbler but for the cobblestones" . :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for all your kind comments. It's so touching to read them.
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